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The color palette you've chosen is great, but I think you should put some darker values in the lower left of the large panel. It'll help pop your focus quite a bit more and tell the reader that the environment is at the furthest point from it's light source.
I think there might be too much pink in your dude's left heel. It kind of looks like he jumped in the water to cool his feet down after walking on hot coals.
It might be cool to make some medium to large opaque lines (low opacity) from top right to bottom left to indicate rays of sunlight cutting through the water. I would probably do it behind and in front of the characters to illustrate as much depth as possible.
I might also put more air bubbles emanating from him to the surface. Her too? She looks like she's some sort of half-breed mermaid so maybe not.
This is just a preference thing but I kind of liked the panel borders you had in your pencils. They were hand made and not ruled, which was awesome.
This is really nice, though, Julia. Keep up the great work!